By Habit, I do not write poems, I don't think I have the talent. But then yesterday a friend challenged me that I could come up with only a depressing one. Well so I came up with this in about 10 minutes
Crimson red and orange bright/
the sun sets to my window right/
birdies nest in and bugsies buzz out/
Gently the crescent shimmers and twinkies pout!
Sounds more like a kindergarten rhyme, doesn't it? Anyway I feel good about it.
7 comments:
nice one birju...keep writing like this and i am sure..depression will automatically set in ;-P...on a serious note..it actually sounds like a peice from the poems i read in school textbooks..where i could never understand the meaning and finally had to cram it all :-)
i was actually picturing a 1st std kid folding palms (as they typically do while reciting) and reciting this when i came across the list line of your post :)- nice one dude
@ Seeta, Thanks :)
@ Dubeyji, than you for your comment, can't help notice that your comments are more witty that your blog posts :P
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